Ah, thanks for the heads up. How do I edit a post? And given she heals back to normal due to get immortality, it's like the first time ever...
PS: Yes, I changed it from her sparring with her brother to fighting a wannabe political position stealer (demon politics you know). It just...
Thanks everyone! This scene was never going to be technical, but I was stuck after the first sentence for days trying to picture what was...
That's true, but if I just wrote: they sparred while they talked, that would super lame. I'm not going to go into full detail, but I like to have...
YES! That's exactly what I'm after. Thank you Nachi! This is the second book in the series, the first of which I've recently published (thank...
I love Deadpool! Unfortunately though comics don't really describe actions with words very well nor show all of the steps in fighting scenes,...
Thanks for answering, but could you give me an example? I've tried googling but I haven't found anything with enough information. What lock, how...
Hey, writing a book with a character that's immortal so she doesn't mind self harming herself during fights in order to get the upper hand. Like...
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