God in a Coffee Cup

Discussion in 'Off Topic Area' started by Jack, Dec 14, 2003.

  1. Jack

    Jack Valued Member

    I wrote this earlier, after a cup of coffee.


    Oh! It was a sweet springtime ‘noon,
    And lest, came the end of my cartoon,
    I thought to myself ‘Hark!
    Coffee would wake me up, and
    So sensually shake me up’

    Ah, how the granules were poured,
    Whilst hot, sweet water boiled,
    For a moment I felt a little bored,
    Until water splashed porcelain,
    And my cup was soiled.

    Sniffing its bitter, rich aroma
    Sipping the hot liquid sex,
    Whilst typing into my computer, Tahoma,
    I suddenly felt a little perplexed

    Oh! And then it was all clear,
    At the bottom of the cup, a single granule
    Still remained with cheer,

    Oh! How it had kept its hold
    Whilst I drank intoxicated,
    There it was, like a nugget of gold

    The hot liquid sex,
    Sensory pleasure,
    That single, bitter granule,
    God.
     
  2. God

    God New Member

    what's up

    never been there.
     
  3. Jack

    Jack Valued Member

    Whoops - move this to off topic! Sorry.
     
  4. nzric

    nzric on lookout for bad guys

    Black as hell, strong as death, sweet as love.

    "Coffee falls into the stomach ... ideas begin to move, things remembered arrive at full gallop ... the shafts of wit start up like sharp-shooters, similies arise, the paper is covered with ink ..." -- Honore de Balzac
     
  5. Nerevar

    Nerevar A son of a mother

    Nice one, Fellow Coffee addict.
     
  6. heat1012000

    heat1012000 New Member

    deep man. that is so full of emotion its scary. keep writing mate i'd love to hear more of your writing
     

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